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12 September 2010 @ 10:02 pm
It Ends Tonight  
Note: Part of the Ashakiran!verse.
Warning: Implications of child prostitution.

Ashakiran
It Ends Tonight


Year 3228, 4th Cycle, 2nd Period

Crimson drops splashed onto white fabric, dying it a shade it was never intended to be. The startled gasp and moan of pain eclipsed the silent tears startled look. Small limbs scrambled to move the heavy weight that was slowly leaking the life giving fluid off the one it was sprawled a top of.

“Leeteuk?” he called, trying to draw forth a response from the now free boy.

“H-Heechul?” came the stuttered reply from a tear streaked face.

“It’s ok. Come on,” Heechul grasped him gently, helping him to his feet and closing the now discolored white fabric around his body.

Wide eyes stared at the fallen man where he laid with a knife protruding from the back of his neck. “Y-You killed him,” he stuttered, clutching tighter to Heechul.

“Yes,” he said simply. “I’ve had enough. No one can hurt us. Not anymore.”

“Heechul, you killed him!” Leeteuk said, his voice rising in tone as panic set in. Someone would come looking, someone to check on or collect them and then they would know, they would see what had been done.

“Yes,” Heechul repeated.

“I was fine! I would have been fine,” Leeteuk said with more conviction then he felt.

“This wasn’t about you,” Heechul snapped. “I’m done with this life.”

“This is our home,” Leeteuk murmured.

“This isn’t a home. I have read-”

“You and your books!” Leeteuk snapped cutting him off. “Life isn’t a story! This isn’t just another story! You can’t just kill someone!” he yelled swinging his arm wildly at the man. A second later they both froze as they heard footsteps in the hall. Frantically Leeteuk glanced between the dead man and the door.

“Are you with me?” Heechul whispered.

Leeteuk didn’t have to think about it, not really. Where else could he possibly be? “Yes,” he whispered.

Heechul nodded and crossed to the body, pulling the knife free with a sickeningly wet noise. Although Leeteuk turned away, he didn’t manage to keep from losing the small amount of food he had been able to eat that day. Heechul ignored him as he heaved the contents of his stomach onto the plushy carpeted floor, in favor of turning towards the door.

When it opened, he was ready for whoever was there, bloody knife clutched in his hand. There in the doorway stood the woman who was the only mother they had ever known, the last person Leeteuk had wanted to see. “Is everything-” she began, but cut it off with a gasp as she took in the room, the man, the blood, and Heechul standing with the knife.

Leeteuk turned to face his partner, “Heechul,” he murmured. There was nothing they could do against her. They could hardly hurt her, let alone kill her.

“We are leaving,” Heechul said darkly.

“I know you are upset,” she told him, as if trying to sooth an animal. “It must be horrible to see someone killed in front of you. I’m so glad you are safe.”

“I killed him,” Heechul replied as though it hardly mattered. She gasped again and her eyes widened. “And I will kill you too if you don’t let us go.”

“Now Heechul, don’t be ridiculous. There is nowhere for you to go,” but Heechul was no longer listening to a word she was saying. Leeteuk watched with horror as the arm holding the knife whipped out and the object flew at her. It embedded itself in her leg and she screamed, crumpling to the ground in pain.

A second later, Heechul was grabbing his wrist and pulling him out the door, forcing him to run with him. He assumed they would run to their rooms, as if they would provide some sort of shelter, but Heechul skipped them entirely, running beyond them, and into corridors they had never been through before, yet still knew of. The door to the outside wasn’t locked, and they burst through it, ignoring the clamor behind them that was likely the sound of their pursuit.

Bare feet on the hard rock of the street was hardly convenient, but they couldn’t stop to change that any more then they could stop for directions. With no destination in mind, they ran, and with every step they took, Leeteuk could feel the protest beginning in his body. He was fit, but not for this sort of exercise.

Still it was as if with each stride of their legs, each slap of their feet against rock, that Leeteuk could feel Heechul’s desire and purpose flow through him. Things began to slip away, like the pain in the soles of his tender feet, the burn in his legs, the gasps in his breath, as every motion took them closer to something, something that they had never known.

Through the streets they ran, trying to convince themselves that the sirens they were hearing were a normal part of this world they had never experienced and not the sound of their inevitable end. If they had been a little older or perhaps a little wiser, it might have occurred to them that there was really nowhere to go, yet it hadn’t and didn’t as they ran with no real direction.

A large wall stood before them, and in it, an opening into what appeared to be nothingness. Heechul ran right for it, Leeteuk at his side now, running with him as a partner. They burst from a side street, startling the men who were milling about and not expecting the appearance of two young boys as they dashed through the opening. There were cries to ‘stop’, ‘wait’, or in general not to do that, but they ignored them, running to what Leeteuk knew as some sort of vehicles only from the books Heechul had read.

Heechul paused by one, fiddling with it until he managed to get it to produce a rumbling noise. He threw one leg over what looked to be the padded seat and settled onto it. The vehicle rose off the ground as he pressed another button and Leeteuk rushed forward to scramble on behind him, barely fitting on the seat and wrapping his arms tightly around Heechul’s waist. Shouts of a more frantic nature were coming from behind them now and the vehicle lurched forward, jerkily at first and then with a smoothing gentleness until they were racing off over brown and dead land, kicking up dust behind them.

For a while Leeteuk kept glancing over his shoulder to see if anyone was following but it seemed that no one was. That was good, for he didn’t know what they would do if they had been followed. It wasn’t until they had gone for quite some time that two things hit him. They had left the safety of the city and what he knew to be the Dome, the only livable place left on the planet but more importantly, the boy in front of him was shaking with sobs.

“Heechul?” he whispered softly.

It took a moment for Heechul to say anything, and when he did, he only said three words while looking straight ahead. “We are free.”

That was such a strange concept for one who had always spent his life where he had and knew no other way of living. That Heechul seemed to grasp it confused Leeteuk, yet he felt that he knew at least a few things of what Heechul might be talking about. He would never again have to let people touch him because he was told to. He would never again have to undress in front of and touch a total stranger. He would never again have to watch some hit Heechul because they liked the way his skin turned a bright pink.

Heechul had always talked about the way things “should be”, but Leeteuk had thought that had just been him reading one too many books. Perhaps that hadn’t been it at all. Maybe, just maybe, Leeteuk thought that some of what Heechul had read had been true, and if so, then maybe, just maybe, they might truly be free.

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AN: Look I'm alive and still writing! I had the desire to write in this verse all of the sudden so this little peace was created. The next chapter of 'Of Flesh' is being edited as I type so that will be out soon enough for everyone. (I'm thinking tomorrow). Hopefully my life has regulated enough to the point where I can find the time to write more regularly.
 
 
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renichifreakrenichifreak on September 13th, 2010 02:08 am (UTC)
so beautifully written, bb...

/in awe
Kat Elrickat_elric on September 13th, 2010 02:13 am (UTC)
Thank you dear. My muses were very creative yesterday.
lettherebeminho on September 13th, 2010 02:16 am (UTC)
it's definitely great to hear from you again!! and i'm glad you brought something spectacular along with you! :)

this is really good and really powerful and i can't wait to read more of what you've got for this universe. haha

keep up the good work. <3
Kat Elrickat_elric on September 13th, 2010 02:20 am (UTC)
Thank you. ^_^

I have a lot for this universe! So much more then even I know I think, lol.

Thank you I will try!
curionenenecurionenene on September 13th, 2010 02:17 am (UTC)
You're alive! \o/

Wow, so Heechul got out that way *blinks*. Why am I not surprised he chose the most flamboyant way to get out?

Hmm... moral dillemma here though... child prostitution v.s. murder... *Rubs chin*

I'll comment again when I have time to read properly, but for now... yeah...
Kat Elrickat_elric on September 13th, 2010 02:22 am (UTC)
I am! ^_^

Yep that is how they got out.

Ah you noticed that did you?

No worries dear.
Emmastripysockz on September 13th, 2010 07:20 am (UTC)
spot for later
Emmastripysockz on September 13th, 2010 08:28 pm (UTC)
So I found that you'd updated this morning, and that made me gleeful, and then I got home and decided to be a good girl and do my homework before reading it and that was painful, and now I've read it and YOU'RE BACK *hugs* and we're getting FFF soon *more gleeful* the world is right again!!! :D

I loved this as always, you wrote it with such bittersweetness - the way Leeteuk was half convinced that having a real life was something that could only be found in a book absolutely broke my heart! I love that he trusted Heechul so much despite that though, and that Heechul actually had the nerve to break free (from the sound of it Leeteuk might not have been alright this time) and just everything *sigh*

Lol I don't think I'd realised how much I've missed your writing ^^

Also the fact that Heechul has now killed someone - to be honest, I think that's completely in character for him, he's been repressing anger against his captors for so long, and having to watch Leeteuk suffering so much, he'd definitely snap. However, I also thought the way he only wounded the woman was also very realistic - it would've been too cold-blooded for Heechul to kill her, since she wasn't threatening them directly.

Also, I'm so excited to see an update for THIS verse!! I'm completely in love with it XD

Yay! Ok that is all ^_^
Kat Elrickat_elric on September 25th, 2010 04:57 pm (UTC)
Thanks. *head desk* Clearly I'm not back back, just kinda back. lol.

I had to think that Leeteuk, growing up like this, would only know this world and would have no idea that there truly was anything else beyond that. Heechul is a tough cookie and I have to imagine that it would take so much for him to not only realize that there could be more but to realize that what was happening to them was wrong as well.

I miss writing so much, but I simply don't have time for it...

I do to. I feel that Heechul would kill for his members and friends if it came to that. Also remember she was the only mother they had ever known. Even though she was their pimp, it would have been very hard for him to have killed her.

Thanks. ^_^
Emmastripysockz on September 27th, 2010 08:14 pm (UTC)
Lol, well so long as you never abandon us I'm content! And aww I know the feeling of all free time being sucked out of your life, I hope it gets better soon! We'll wait for you to return ^_^

Have I told you lately how much I love your characterisation of the boys? It's just so perfect, and well-thought out! I completely agree with everything you said ^_^

(Though when you said "she was their pimp" I had a flashback to a youtube comment where someone joked that Kahi was the pimp of After School and now she's become Leeteuk and Heechul's pimp in my head, I can't unsee it and I DON'T KNOW WHETHER TO BE AMUSED OR DISTURBED XD)
Kat Elrickat_elric on September 27th, 2010 11:58 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I will never abandon you all. I love writing and sharing it with my wonderful readers. You guys are just the best and I so look forward all of your comments on everything. It isn't that I have stopped writing, I write a very little each day, but it is just that, a very little. lol

Thank you. Characterization is one of the things I love working on and clearly it shows. lol.

hehe wow... I wouldn't know either...
fangirlnumber3jirrana on September 13th, 2010 08:53 am (UTC)
Love it hun!!

I really like this series. (despite the other ideas you kept putting in my head!!)

*cough*SHINee*cough*
Kat Elrickat_elric on September 25th, 2010 04:58 pm (UTC)
Thanks dear. This universe has a special place in my heart. An increadibly special place. ^_^

I do not know of what you speak...
lil_aqua_chiclil_aqua_chic on September 13th, 2010 09:52 am (UTC)
So that's how Heechul & Leeteuk left! Q____Q and wow Heechul >_< the "shaking with sobs" bit made me want to hug him. They're finally FREE!!

Also it's good to hear you're writing again and that we'll have 'of flesh, fur and fang' soon!!! Can't wait! keke welcome back <3
Kat Elrickat_elric on September 25th, 2010 05:00 pm (UTC)
Yep that is how.

Thanks. *sigh* I still don't have a lot of time for it so I'm not sure how much I'll be writing in the near future.
Lixyseneferia on September 13th, 2010 07:33 pm (UTC)
So glad to see you've updated one of your stories. I can't believe how absolutely creative you are. All your stories are so great.
I definitely can't wait to read more of this series.
Kat Elrickat_elric on September 25th, 2010 05:00 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I honestly don't know where all of this comes from half of the time...

^_^
Our Heroine aka Jenn: [heenim]kyttenfae on September 23rd, 2010 10:05 am (UTC)
I want to squish Teukie and Heenim into tiny pieces and hug them and make everything better... but then Heechul's working on making that happen all on his own, bless him.

The two of them are my favourites from SuJu (I joke that I want to be Teukie when I grow up lol) and while it kills me to have them have a past like this, the fact they're free now (as obviously I knew they would be from the prequel) makes it, I dunno, not ok, but easier to bear, and I'm /so/ interested to see where you take this Verse from here! <333333333333333

*goes to make a mixed playlist of SuJu songs and the Firefly soundtrack to listen to as I go to sleep*
Kat Elrickat_elric on September 25th, 2010 05:02 pm (UTC)
Heechul is one of those people who, if something isn't right, he will fix it and make it right himself, not just wait for it to fix itself.

lol. I love the two of them to, is it obvious? hehe. Thanks.

That is fun!
insanityplaysinsanityplays on October 14th, 2010 12:30 am (UTC)
It took me so long to get to this D: But it really broke my heart murder</i> someone at so young an age just to make it all stop ;-; <3 Loved this one.
Kat Elrickat_elric on October 22nd, 2010 01:11 am (UTC)
Yeah. I hated to have to do this to them, but it is such a big part of who they are... Thank you.
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