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01 January 2010 @ 09:23 pm
From the Soul to the Song - Verse Sixteen  
From the Soul to the Song

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Verse Seventeen


Character Information

AN: Yes I am a dork that plays WoW. Sadly I am on the US realms so my chances of ever playing with one of the boys is probably 0% (not that that had anything to do with me playing the game.) So at this point in the series what are you all thinking? Are my silent readers still hanging around for the fun? I know there has to be some of you. ^_^

Thanks guys for all of the comments this far! I love hearing what you are thinking. I love it when some of you say that you saw things coming and I also love hearing about when I totally surprise you. If there are things you don't like you can tell me that too. Or if something is confusing please let me know. I'm growing as a writer and things like that help. Feel free to ask questions as some of you have. If its not contained later in the story I will definitely do my best to answer them. Remember the Character information post exists for your benefit! Thanks guys and hope you start the new year out right!
Current Mood: exhaustedexhausted
bundles and bundles of loooooove: hangengmearii87 on January 2nd, 2010 05:14 pm (UTC)
This is getting soooo interesting!!!! :) :) :) :) I"m wicked excited for the rest of it!

Kat Elrickat_elric on January 3rd, 2010 03:11 am (UTC)
I'm glad you are liking it. Words cannot describe how excited I am for you all to read the next chapters! ^_^
miangel_zezchic: Siwonmiangel_zezchic on January 3rd, 2010 12:47 am (UTC)
“Drawing a picture of a squirrel falling out of a tree was not helping,” Kyuhyun told him, narrowing his eyes

This had me cracking up sooooooooooooooooo bad. I can actually picture Kyuhyun going through all of his ideas and explanations on the potential strategy, spilling his heart out to make their team win, all the while, Mimi, the only person he manages to drag into strategizing while everyone else is immersed in their own personal issues, is hardly any help. Mimi's attention would've slipped away five minutes into Kyuhyun's explanation and I'm guessing that's when the squirrel drawing came about...XD

And although this implies no romantic scene whatsoever, I'm happy for the QMi moment (bias is screaming out in joy right now).

Sneaky leader and all his ways of getting around the members. What would they do without Teuk?

I'm glad they managed to solve their issues, esp EunKiHae (though the awkwardness might still hang around for a bit)....

SUJU ARE READY TO TAKE DOWN DBSK N SS501!!!!!!!!!!!!! (not meaning to sound like a hate speech, trust me, I <3 DBSK!)
Kat Elrickat_elric on January 3rd, 2010 03:14 am (UTC)
Lol. I just got a mental image of Kyuhyun pacing and talking and Mimi starts off by recording notes. Then mid sentence he just starts to doodle lord knows what, but a squirrel falling out of a tree is included somewhere.

They would crumble without Leeteuk. He holds them all together like glue... or peanut butter, I haven't decided. *snicker*

Issues are sort of solved. We shall see in the next chapter.

*laughs* Don't worry, I know what you mean. Everyone seems to be really excited to see that scene. I hope I can live up to all of your expectations.
Jazzyyoomaydakaynay on January 3rd, 2010 04:15 am (UTC)
i am SO GLAD kibum did not end up mauling hyukkie! ><

i love this; you're so good at putting realistic emotions and actions (not fanciful ones that the reader/writer only WISH would really happen) into play. <3 Are you planning to add more characters into this, like maybe another group who is actually bad? (like on the dark team going against the ensouled, not like... suju caught up in relationship angst in fighting practice bad... lol XD) I can't remember if the bad guys could be real people anymore or if they were just monsters... gawsh I'm mumbling to myself >< ANYWAY... *thumbs up*

one another note, Kyuhyun's use of WoW as a way to set up strategy? brilliance. *claps* XD hopefully things can start rolling, now! go Suju, go! =D

*waits excitedly for new chapters* ^___^
Kat Elrickat_elric on January 3rd, 2010 05:35 am (UTC)
Yeah Kibum mauling Hyuk probably would have been bad...

Thanks. It's good to hear you say that.

I'm not planning at the moment to add any other group. The Dark Ones can steal a persons Song and then inhabit and control the empty body. The more powerful ones can even possess an inhabitted body. Other wise they appear as black humoid forms that can only be hurt by Weaver created weapons.

I do plan on adding one more group much later but not on the bad side. They are going to be on the good side but it's a surprise who it is! ^_^
slu3a0 on January 3rd, 2010 07:04 pm (UTC)
wow the story is getting better and better!! =D this chapter was so fun!

Hannie talking to Leeteuk while ignoring Heechul hahaha I was laughing so hard!!

Mimi flirting with Kyu wow, it made me want to run and read some Qmi fics LOL, I'm starting to like Zhoumi more and more since I read your fic!!! everytime he appears is a win

I love the KiHae, it must be really difficult for Kibum to share Hae but I like him more because of that, he loves him so much he's trying to make it work. But it seems to me Hyuk has no part in it, he should at least say his opinion, he should defend Hae or defend himself when Kibum was angry...

Leeteuk did a great job!! (thumbs up)! and Kyuhyun strategy plan well done, it was about time!!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter <3333
Kat Elrickat_elric on January 3rd, 2010 07:41 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Aww Mimi is the best. I'm excited that I can make you like him more and more.

Eunhyuk has a few issues... He sees how much Kibum being upset is hurting Donghae and he doesn't want to ad to that.

The next chapter is already up! ^_^
Lixyseneferia on January 19th, 2010 06:22 am (UTC)
I just started reading your fic yesterday. I know I'm very late in the game. Its also making me loose sleep cause I keep wanting to read the next chapter haha. You have such great imagination I love it. This is so detailed every chapter is better than the last one. Your writing is so great.

The fact that you play WOW makes it even better. I've been playing for a year now, I also play on the US realms. I love the reference.
Kat Elrickat_elric on January 19th, 2010 06:32 am (UTC)
Re: Late
Wow. I don't mind that you are late in the game at all. Sadly I know the feeling because I have done that with other stories.

Thank you. i'm glad you are enjoying it. I would have to agree with you that every chapter is better than the last one. I am certainly growing as a writter through this story and getting much better at it.

I love WOW. If we are on the same server we could meet up and play together some time. ^_^
Re: Late - seneferia on January 19th, 2010 10:39 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: Late - kat_elric on January 20th, 2010 12:28 am (UTC) (Expand)
FollowUrDestiny: HG02followurdestiny on January 19th, 2010 05:32 pm (UTC)
Haha Leeteuk just can’t resist acting out his umma role XD… but I’m glad he did… eventhough Heechul is a handful Geng seems to have it all under control – lol at the WoW reference (but Kyu plays Starcraft IRL) The next battle will probably go better ;)
Kat Elrickat_elric on January 20th, 2010 12:36 am (UTC)
Nope. Heechul will perpetually be acting out a mothering role.

Actually Heechul has referred to playing WoW IRL and I think he has even referred to them playing together. Kyuhyun favors Starcraft but I am sure he has played WoW. ^_^
FollowUrDestiny: HanchulTwinsfollowurdestiny on January 20th, 2010 10:28 am (UTC)
interesting (to both comments) XD
(no subject) - kat_elric on January 20th, 2010 03:50 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Chanseyyy: 2woondandanfung on January 22nd, 2010 06:49 am (UTC)
You know what, my comments won't even make sense.

It's all written too damn beautifully. It's just so freaking perfect.

Every LAST WORD. Every last thought, comment, hint.

Perfection. Simply perfection.

I'm in love with you. Love.
Kat Elrickat_elric on January 22nd, 2010 03:48 pm (UTC)
Thank you. This chapter was one of my favorite to write. ^_^